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name010#0,"""Faria"""
text010#0,"""分析の結果、このエネルギー反応は<br>“ルーイナス”の一種と判明しました。"""
text020#0,"""ルシエルでは、ルーイナスと呼ばれる、<br>過去に存在した強力なエネミーを復元する研究をしていました。"""
text030#0,"""しかし、ルシエルの稼働が停止したことで、<br>新種のルーイナスは作られなくなったはず。この未知の個体は一体……?"""
text040#0,"""……空間の歪みの奥に、強力なエネミー反応を確認!<br>警戒してください。"""
text010#0,"""Analysis results show that this energy reaction is a type of \""Ruino\""."""
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Reading, not reaction.

text020#0,"""Leciel was conducting research to restore powerful enemies called \""Ruino\"" that existed in the past."""
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The information in this sentence is out of order. "to restore powerful enemies that existed in the past, naming them \""Ruino\""." would make more sense.

text030#0,"""However, since Leciel's operation has stopped, new types of Ruino should no longer be created. What is this unknown individual...?"""
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"should no longer be being created."

text040#0,"""...A powerful enemy reaction confirmed deep within the spatial distortion! Please be vigilant."""
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"A powerful enemy reading has been confirmed"

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name010#0,"""Faria"""
text010#0,"""未知のルーイナスを確認……!<br>分析を開始します。"""
text020#0,"""あれは、ルイノ・ルーサー!?<br>制御ができず、開発は途中で凍結されたはず……!"""
text030#0,"""非常に強力なエネミーです。<br>くれぐれも注意してください。"""
text010#0,"""Unknown Ruino detected...!<br>Starting analysis."""
text020#0,"""Wait, is that Ruino Loser?<br>Its development was supposed to freeze after it lost control!"""
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"Development should have been suspended on that after it went out of control!" maybe

text030#0,"""It is an extremely powerful enemy.<br>Please exercise extreme caution."""
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name010#0,"""Faria"""
text010#0,"""ルイノ・ルーサーの撃破を確認。<br>無事で何よりです。"""
text020#0,"""しかしなぜ、研究が凍結されたルーイナスが現れたのでしょう。<br>ほかのルシエランたちにも、確認をとってみます。"""
text030#0,"""<%me>さんは、<br>帰還して休んでください。作戦、お疲れ様でした。"""
text010#0,"""Confirmation of Ruino Loser's defeat.<br>I'm relieved you are safe."""
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First sentence here has no verb.

text020#0,"""But why did a Ruino, whose research was frozen, appear?<br>I will check with the other Lecielans as well."""
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First sentence should probably be something like "But how could this Ruino appear when its development was supposed to have been suspended?"

Second sentence is a bit awkward.

text030#0,"""<%me>,<br>Please return and rest. Thank you for your hard work on the mission."""
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Lowercase P on please, and take the line break out. Maybe have a line break between the two sentences if you're worried the player's name might make punctuation clip.

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Area0S#0,"""Paragon of Creation: [Loser]"""
Area0L#0,"""Paragon of Creation: [Loser]"""
Title#0,"""Paragon of Creation: [Loser]"""
Explanation#0,"""西クヴァリス周辺に、超巨大な反応を確認。<br>新種のルーイナスと推測されるが、どのような事が起きるか、予測ができない。<br>アークス各員は、総力をもって、迫りくる未知なる脅威を殲滅せよ。<br>――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――<br>Clear limit: $(0) time(s) <yellow>(※shared among all simultaneous Emergency Quests)※No assist NPCs<c>"""
Explanation#0,"""An extremely large reaction has been detected near Western Kvaris.<br>It is presumed to be a new species of Ruino, but we cannot predict what will happen.<br>All members of Arks must use their full power to annihilate the approaching unknown threat.<br>――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――<br>Clear limit: $(0) time(s) <yellow>(※shared among all simultaneous Emergency Quests)※No assist NPCs<c>"""
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We usually translate 反応 as 'reading', like a radar reading.

SimpleExplanation#0,"""Defeat Ruino Loser"""
s0#0,"""Defeat the target enemy"""
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Area0S#0,"""Simulation: Paragon of Creation: [Loser]"""
Area0L#0,"""Simulation: Paragon of Creation: [Loser]"""
Title#0,"""Simulation: Paragon of Creation: [Loser]"""
Explanation#0,"""これは、さらなる脅威の襲来に備えてアーカイブより再現された想定演習である。<br>現在の設定では、西クヴァリスでの激闘が調整された状態で再生される。<br>戦闘技術を駆使して、“ルイノ・ルーサー\""を迎撃せよ。<br>――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――<br><yellow>※Selling or storing all applicable Battle Triggers will cancel this Quest./No Assist NPCs.<c>"""
Explanation#0,"""This is a simulated training exercise based on archived battle data in preparation for further threats.<br>Under current settings, the fierce battle in Western Kvaris will be replayed with adjustments.<br>Use your combat skills to intercept \""Ruino Loser\"".<br>――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――<br><yellow>※Selling or storing all applicable Battle Triggers will cancel this Quest.No Assist NPCs.<c>"""
SimpleExplanation#0,"""Defeat Ruino Loser"""
s0#0,"""Defeat the target enemy"""
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name010#0,"""Crawford"""
name020#0,"""Aina"""
text010#0,"""……この反応は、“ハイエネミー”だね。<br>通常のスターレスよりもずっと強力な個体だ。"""
text020#0,"""コイツの動きは、これまでのやつらとはひと味違うよ。<br>頑張ってくれたまえ。"""
text030#0,"""ああそうだ、これを言っておかないとね。<br>“よろしく頼むよ”、キミたち。"""
text040#0,"""クロフォード!? ファリアから通信を変わったの?<br>とにかく情報ありがとう、よーし、がんばろう!"""
text010#0,"""...This reaction is from a \""Hi Enemy\"".<br>A much more powerful individual than the usual Starless."""
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Reading not reaction, also the second sentence has no verb.

text020#0,"""Their movements are different from what we've seen before.<br>Do your best."""
text030#0,"""Ah, right, I need to say this.<br>\""I'm counting on you\"" you guys."""
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Second sentence: "Everyone, \""I'm counting on you\""."

text040#0,"""Crawford!? You took over the communication from Faria?<br>Anyway, thanks for the info. Alright, let's do this!"""
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name030#0,"""Manon"""
name040#0,"""Crawford"""
text010#0,"""Whew... we did it. The Scarlet Realm is starting to disappear too!"""
text020#0,"""すまない!\u3000赤色界の影響か、通信が途絶えてしまっていた。<br>どうやら一区切りついたようだね。"""
text030#0,"""あれ?\u3000でもさっき、クロフォードが案内してくれてたけど……。<br>うーん、倒せたからいいの、かな?"""
text020#0,"""Sorry about that! It seems the influence of the Scarlet Realm caused our communication to cut out.<br>It seems things have settled down for now."""
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The double use of "it seems" looks awkward. Please rephrase at least one of them.

text030#0,"""Huh? But Crawford just guided us through earlier...<br>Well, I guess it's fine since we defeated them."""
text040#0,"""I have a lot of questions concerning those foes we faced, but we should head back first."""
text050#0,"""We'll continue investigating on our end too. Good work out there, everyone."""