feat: Eq shadow fallen star#2383
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| Area0L#0,"""Paragon of Creation: [Loser]""" | ||
| Title#0,"""Paragon of Creation: [Loser]""" | ||
| Explanation#0,"""西クヴァリス周辺に、超巨大な反応を確認。<br>新種のルーイナスと推測されるが、どのような事が起きるか、予測ができない。<br>アークス各員は、総力をもって、迫りくる未知なる脅威を殲滅せよ。<br>――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――<br>Clear limit: $(0) time(s) <yellow>（※shared among all simultaneous Emergency Quests）※No assist NPCs<c>""" | ||
| Explanation#0,"""An extremely large reaction has been detected near Western Kvaris.<br>It is presumed to be a new species of Ruino, but we cannot predict what will happen.<br>All members of Arks must use their full power to annihilate the approaching unknown threat.<br>――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――<br>Clear limit: $(0) time(s) <yellow>（※shared among all simultaneous Emergency Quests）※No assist NPCs<c>""" |
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We usually translate 反応 as 'reading', like a radar reading.
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| text010#0,"""Whew... we did it. The Scarlet Realm is starting to disappear too!""" | ||
| text020#0,"""すまない！\u3000赤色界の影響か、通信が途絶えてしまっていた。<br>どうやら一区切りついたようだね。""" | ||
| text030#0,"""あれ？\u3000でもさっき、クロフォードが案内してくれてたけど……。<br>うーん、倒せたからいいの、かな？""" | ||
| text020#0,"""Sorry about that! It seems the influence of the Scarlet Realm caused our communication to cut out.<br>It seems things have settled down for now.""" |
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The double use of "it seems" looks awkward. Please rephrase at least one of them.
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| text010#0,"""ルイノ・ルーサーの撃破を確認。<br>無事で何よりです。""" | ||
| text020#0,"""しかしなぜ、研究が凍結されたルーイナスが現れたのでしょう。<br>ほかのルシエランたちにも、確認をとってみます。""" | ||
| text030#0,"""<%me>さんは、<br>帰還して休んでください。作戦、お疲れ様でした。""" | ||
| text010#0,"""Confirmation of Ruino Loser's defeat.<br>I'm relieved you are safe.""" |
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First sentence here has no verb.
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| text020#0,"""しかしなぜ、研究が凍結されたルーイナスが現れたのでしょう。<br>ほかのルシエランたちにも、確認をとってみます。""" | ||
| text030#0,"""<%me>さんは、<br>帰還して休んでください。作戦、お疲れ様でした。""" | ||
| text010#0,"""Confirmation of Ruino Loser's defeat.<br>I'm relieved you are safe.""" | ||
| text020#0,"""But why did a Ruino, whose research was frozen, appear?<br>I will check with the other Lecielans as well.""" |
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First sentence should probably be something like "But how could this Ruino appear when its development was supposed to have been suspended?"
Second sentence is a bit awkward.
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| text020#0,"""あれは、ルイノ・ルーサー!?<br>制御ができず、開発は途中で凍結されたはず……！""" | ||
| text030#0,"""非常に強力なエネミーです。<br>くれぐれも注意してください。""" | ||
| text010#0,"""Unknown Ruino detected...!<br>Starting analysis.""" | ||
| text020#0,"""Wait, is that Ruino Loser?<br>Its development was supposed to freeze after it lost control!""" |
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"Development should have been suspended on that after it went out of control!" maybe
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| text010#0,"""Analysis results show that this energy reaction is a type of \""Ruino\"".""" | ||
| text020#0,"""Leciel was conducting research to restore powerful enemies called \""Ruino\"" that existed in the past.""" | ||
| text030#0,"""However, since Leciel's operation has stopped, new types of Ruino should no longer be created. What is this unknown individual...?""" | ||
| text040#0,"""...A powerful enemy reaction confirmed deep within the spatial distortion! Please be vigilant.""" |
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"A powerful enemy reading has been confirmed"
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| text030#0,"""しかし、ルシエルの稼働が停止したことで、<br>新種のルーイナスは作られなくなったはず。この未知の個体は一体……？""" | ||
| text040#0,"""……空間の歪みの奥に、強力なエネミー反応を確認！<br>警戒してください。""" | ||
| text010#0,"""Analysis results show that this energy reaction is a type of \""Ruino\"".""" | ||
| text020#0,"""Leciel was conducting research to restore powerful enemies called \""Ruino\"" that existed in the past.""" |
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The information in this sentence is out of order. "to restore powerful enemies that existed in the past, naming them \""Ruino\""." would make more sense.
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| text040#0,"""……空間の歪みの奥に、強力なエネミー反応を確認！<br>警戒してください。""" | ||
| text010#0,"""Analysis results show that this energy reaction is a type of \""Ruino\"".""" | ||
| text020#0,"""Leciel was conducting research to restore powerful enemies called \""Ruino\"" that existed in the past.""" | ||
| text030#0,"""However, since Leciel's operation has stopped, new types of Ruino should no longer be created. What is this unknown individual...?""" |
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"should no longer be being created."
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| text040#0,"""クロフォード!? ファリアから通信を変わったの？<br>とにかく情報ありがとう、よーし、がんばろう！""" | ||
| text010#0,"""...This reaction is from a \""Hi Enemy\"".<br>A much more powerful individual than the usual Starless.""" | ||
| text020#0,"""Their movements are different from what we've seen before.<br>Do your best.""" | ||
| text030#0,"""Ah, right, I need to say this.<br>\""I'm counting on you\"" you guys.""" |
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Second sentence: "Everyone, \""I'm counting on you\""."
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| text020#0,"""コイツの動きは、これまでのやつらとはひと味違うよ。<br>頑張ってくれたまえ。""" | ||
| text030#0,"""ああそうだ、これを言っておかないとね。<br>“よろしく頼むよ”、キミたち。""" | ||
| text040#0,"""クロフォード!? ファリアから通信を変わったの？<br>とにかく情報ありがとう、よーし、がんばろう！""" | ||
| text010#0,"""...This reaction is from a \""Hi Enemy\"".<br>A much more powerful individual than the usual Starless.""" |
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Reading not reaction, also the second sentence has no verb.
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| text020#0,"""ルシエルでは、ルーイナスと呼ばれる、<br>過去に存在した強力なエネミーを復元する研究をしていました。""" | ||
| text030#0,"""しかし、ルシエルの稼働が停止したことで、<br>新種のルーイナスは作られなくなったはず。この未知の個体は一体……？""" | ||
| text040#0,"""……空間の歪みの奥に、強力なエネミー反応を確認！<br>警戒してください。""" | ||
| text010#0,"""Analysis results show that this energy reaction is a type of \""Ruino\"".""" |
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| text030#0,"""<%me>さんは、<br>帰還して休んでください。作戦、お疲れ様でした。""" | ||
| text010#0,"""Confirmation of Ruino Loser's defeat.<br>I'm relieved you are safe.""" | ||
| text020#0,"""But why did a Ruino, whose research was frozen, appear?<br>I will check with the other Lecielans as well.""" | ||
| text030#0,"""<%me>,<br>Please return and rest. Thank you for your hard work on the mission.""" |
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Lowercase P on please, and take the line break out. Maybe have a line break between the two sentences if you're worried the player's name might make punctuation clip.
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