docs: structural & grammatical improvements #407
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Alteration Summary
The full_description.txt file has undergone structural & grammatical enhancements. The structural improvement included the use of HTML tags, which F-Droid supports. Headings were added to promote logical flow & give your reader an outline of the features that you're referring to. The file has been optimized for an English-speaking audience. If any of my interpretations of your statements are inaccurate, then please let me know & I'll alter them to suit your message.
Details
Specific changes include:
1st Statement (Line 1) - Grammar correction & hyperlink inclusion for first sentence. Here, it appears you are talking about 2 separate apps. These apps may be similar, even identical in operation; yet, if you are referring to 2 separate apps, then we substitute the singular 'is' with the plural 'are'. I removed the second reference to "Android" because it's implied that you're referring to the Android OS, that was mentioned previously in the same sentence.
2nd Statement (Line 3) - This sentence was rewritten to be grammatically correct.
3rd Statement (Lines 5-7) - This statement was converted into a vertical list.
4th Statement (Lines 9-11) - I rephrased this to convey the idea that I think you're trying to send to your audience. I also replaced the quotes for app name with italics. This makes it more consistent with style guide suggestions & still emphasizes the app name.
5th Statement (Line 13) - It sounds like you're saying that this app will work just fine as a web browsing app. Yet, it functions better through Android apps, which it perfectly integrates with. So, it was reworded to reflect this interpretation.
6th Statement (Line 15) - The quotes were removed & the paragraph was reworded for readability.
7th Statement (Lines 17 & 18) - Removed the "SOURCE CODE" segment; it was redundant because it's already featured below in the licensing segment.
8th Statement (Lines 20 & 21) - Converted CREDIT into lowercase & used heading style. Installed hyperlink.
Question
Regarding the 6th statement (Line 15): It sounds like this may be a call to action? Are you asking your readers to join something specific, like the GitHub project? If so, you may want to include that here. If you let me know what you're referring to I can update this line.