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Marcelu,

Projekt prezentuje się super! 👍
Zostawiłem parę drobnych uwag, ale to raczej kosmetyka ;)

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.hero__column--wider > img {
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Lepiej nadać obrazkowi klasę i po niej stylować - w BEM jest takie zalecenie

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.features__title, .pricing__title, .team__title {
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Zamiast grupować można też stworzyć nowy Block lub Element i do niego przypisać wspólne cech np. .header lub title

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<div class="hero">
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Można by było się zastanowić nad znacznikiem article, bo mamy jedną spójną treść - niewielką, ale jest :P

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<div class="hero__column--wider">
<img src="/images/screen.png" alt="screen">
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Zwróć uwagę, że między obramowaniem, a obrazkiem jest prześwit - warto go usunąć - wystarczy nadać białe tło :)

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<div class="features__container">

<div class="features__element element">
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Zastanawim się czy bym tutaj nie zrobił ul > li, bo mamy "listę" cech czyli "...container" to ul, a "element" to li

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<p class="plan__description">Up to 7 Projects</p>
<p class="plan__description">2 Additional Developers</p>
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Tutaj zdecydowanie ul > li jako lista elementów dot. danego pakietu cenowego

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Odstępów nie robimy przy pomocy br tylko margin/padding lub inny sposób. Ten znacznik jest używany tylko do łamania tekstu.

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<div class="pricing__container">
<!-- PONIZSZE ELEMENTY ALTERNATYWNIE DO ZROBIENIA ZA POMOCĄ UL I LI -->
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Potwierdzam, można też dla plan zrobić article - jako jedna spójna treść, bo przecież jeden pakiet taką treści jest czyli mielibyśmy x3 article

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<div class="team__container">

<div class="team__member member">
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TUtaj też może być lista członków zespołu więc ul > li

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</section>

<section class="footer">
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Można też footer

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Marcelu,

Zostały jeszcze 2 uwagi :)

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👍

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.features__title, .pricing__title, .team__title {
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👍

</header>

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👍

<section class="features" id="features">
<h2 class="features__title">FEATURES</h2>
<div class="features__container">
<h2 class="features__title title">FEATURES</h2>
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👍


<div class="pricing__title--container">
<h2 class="pricing__title">CHOOSE YOUR PRICING PLAN</h2>
<header class="pricing__title--container">
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👍

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Tutaj br powinno być usunięte - używamy tylko do rozdzielania tekstu, a nie do robienia odstępu.

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<li class="plan__description">Up to 7 Projects</li>
<li class="plan__description">2 Additional Developers</li>
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Tylko te 2 elementy powinny być listą - reszta tj. nazwa pakietu czy cenna itp. już nie. To nie jest cześć listy.

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