simplified poem

Author: zesameri

poems.html

@@ -48,28 +48,20 @@ <h1 class="header">
         <dd class="list__item">
           <p> Hello, World! </p>
         </dd> -->
-        <dt> dear catman </dt>
+        <dt> dear old lover </dt>
         <dd class="list__item">
-          <p> I got a message from an old boyfriend,
-            "Since you don't have any interest being friends, perhaps we can be 
-            penpals? Hope all is well with you." <br>
-            When he comes up I tell people that I liked chasing the wind. 
-            <br><br>
-            I have the box of evidence from when we were partners, but I still 
-            haven't solved our case. I know now all the things we did wrong. 
-            Even though I'm fixed, I can't think that you've done the same.
+          <p> I got a message from an old boyfriend, asking me to be penpals, 
+            and wishing me well. But dating him was like chasing the wind. 
             <br><br>
             It's wild that I chased the wind. When I felt like running after 
             something, and something felt like nothing and now nothing keeps 
             trying to play tag.
             <br><br>
-            I'm sorry for the wind.
-             <br><br>
-            Maybe someday you'll meet me outside my window, when I look out all 
-            I see is rain.
-            <br><br>
-            m'yako,<br>
-            kvitka
+            I know how the wind feels.<br>
+            Somedays I think <br>
+            I'll meet you outside my window, <br>
+            but when I look out <br>
+            all I see is rain.
             </p>
         </dd>
         <dt> tuesday night </dt>