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This document contains several sloppy formatting artifacts and grammatical inconsistencies that must be addressed before this is merged into the official repository.
**Required Changes (Confidence Level: High):**
1. **Fix Spacing and Punctuation Errors (Critical):**
* In the intro, remove the trailing space before the comma: change `**Super Representatives (SR)** ,` to `**Super Representatives (SR)**,`.
* Under **Submit Voting Request**, you separated the subject from the verb with an invalid comma and mixed singular/plural forms.
* **Change:** `**Super Representative Partner** or **Super Representative Candidate**, will formally...`
* **To:** `**Super Representative Partners**, or **Super Representative Candidates** will formally...`
2. **Standardize Terminology:**
* You use "Initiate" for the proposal discussion but "Initialize" in the markdown template. Change `## How to Initialize the Voting Request` to `## How to Initiate the Voting Request` for consistency.
3. **Improve Wording and Phrasing:**
* *Intro:* Change `process also known as network upgrade` to `process also known as a network upgrade`.
* *Community Discussion:* The current sentence is bloated and repetitive. Change `participate in the discussion, collect opinions and feedback, and make appropriate revisions and updates to the proposal based on the discussion results.` to `engage the community, gather feedback, and iterate on the proposal accordingly.`
* *Voting and Implementation:* Change the robotic phrasing `greater than or equal to 18` to `at least 18`.
Please clean up these rudimentary errors so the governance guidelines reflect a professional standard.
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This document contains several sloppy formatting artifacts and grammatical inconsistencies that must be addressed before this is merged into the official repository.
Fix Spacing and Punctuation Errors (Critical):
**Super Representatives (SR)** ,to**Super Representatives (SR)**,.**Super Representative Partner** or **Super Representative Candidate**, will formally...**Super Representative Partners**, or **Super Representative Candidates** will formally...Standardize Terminology:
## How to Initialize the Voting Requestto## How to Initiate the Voting Requestfor consistency.Improve Wording and Phrasing:
process also known as network upgradetoprocess also known as a network upgrade.participate in the discussion, collect opinions and feedback, and make appropriate revisions and updates to the proposal based on the discussion results.toengage the community, gather feedback, and iterate on the proposal accordingly.greater than or equal to 18toat least 18.Please clean up these rudimentary errors so the governance guidelines reflect a professional standard.